Elijah's Story

Elijah has two stories that I want to post.  This one came home today (last day of school is Wednesday!) and it's too brilliant to not post RIGHT NOW!  As always, all spelling is his.  On this particular story, I arranged it so it was easier to see the organization of the piece.

Ahem.

Name:  Elijah Ruben Thacker  Rm. #204
Who lives here?  Spong bob and spider man live here!

Well how it all started is some people moved here 

and they were unpaken 

and a nock was heard 

and they opened the door 

and the people walked in 

and the people yealed very lowed hay dude lets party on dude.  

Ok dude and he sead no because he had to unpack some more 

and he had to buy a bed

and he had to buy a lot of clowes

and he had to clean the house

and he had to buy a cimney

and he had to buy a mail box

and he had to buy a job

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a place to live

and spounge bob and also spider man had to buy a window

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a buck bed

and spuonge bob and spider man had to buy some food

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a tv

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a watch

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a tree

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a straw berry plant

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a vacume

and sponge bob and spider man had to buy a gate

and spo- ob and spider man had to buy a dishwasher

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a refrigearater

and sponge bob and spider man had to buy a filter

and sponge bob and spider man had to buy fifeteen blankets

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a clock

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a porch light

and spounge bob and spider man needed to have a few gates for there house

and spounge bob and spider man neeeded a lot of heters for there house

and spounge bob and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a fire extiwshter

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a fire pit

and spounge bob and spider man had to buy a sink

and spounge bob and spider man just keept buying things all over again 

so there house exploded 

so they had to buy it again 

so they lived happly ever after.

...  To note:  That was all only two sentences.  We have since talked about two writing principles.  1 - Making lists.  2 - Run-on sentences.